Gap year experiences(主语) can lessen(谓语) the blow(宾语) when it comes to adjusting to college and being thrown into a brand new environment(when引导时间状语,when it comes to 可看做固定搭配:当提及…) , making it easier to focus on academics and activities rather than “acclimation” blunders.(V-ing短语作结果状语)
翻译:当提到适应大学生活,或是被扔进一个全新的环境里,间隔年经验能帮助学生减少这种打击,也能使学生更容易集中到学术和活动上,而不是适应新环境而犯错。