Do not use your own name in the email; use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)
【审题】
| 应用文类型 | 建议信，由suggestions可判断。 |
| 收信人 | a foreign friend of yours |
| 写信背景 | A foreign friend of yours has recently graduated from college and intends to find a job in China |
| 内容要点 | make some suggestions |
| 署名 | Li Ming |
【参考范文】
Dear Friend,
I am writing this email to you to make suggestions for your job hunting in China.
For one thing, it would be greatly appreciated if you could dress formally for the interview because it is beneficial for showing your sincerity and leaving a good impression. For another, it is advisable to display your confidence when answering questions, because employers are more likely to judge your capacity by your external performance.
I sincerely hope that my advice can draw your attention and wish you to find a desirable job.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【语言素材】
1. 建议求职时要目标明确。
It is advisable to hunt for a job with a clear target.
2. 多和面试官进行眼神沟通可能会取得更好的效果。
Making more eye contact with the interviewer would yield better results.
3. 在面试中保持微笑会有助于拉近与面试官之间的距离。
It is helpful for you to smile during the interview process to get closer to the interviewer.
