1. 建议信题目中常会有tips/suggestions/advice等词,如
Directions:
A foreign friend of yours has recently graduated from college and intends to find a job in China. Write him/her an email to make some suggestions.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your own name in the email; use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)
2. 在写作时审完题后要注意先理清楚思路。具体思路可以参考以下:
首段:表示相关+写信目的。 第一句话一般需要介绍一下自己,否则收信人如果不认识你,则会感觉突兀,你为什么要给我提建议?但是介绍又不是简单说一下我是李明,因为你是谁并不能给你提建议提供合理性。所以我们要和话题相联系,表示相关性,这样建议才更容易被接受与采纳。比如:给校长写信提建议改善学生身体状况可以写“我是学校体育协会的负责人。”这样让人感觉你在这方面确实有发言权。第二句话则是表明写信具体的目的是就某方面提建议。
中段:具体建议+理由,写两个点。建议信自然要给出具体的建议,但如果只有一个建议,比如“学生要均衡饮食”,那这个句子往往比较简单短小,达不到题目的字数要求,也没有什么新意,无法说服别人采纳你的建议,所以可以加上提建议的理由或者好处,让人更容易信服也更容易写出一些漂亮高级的句型完成写作的要求。
尾段:盼复。尾段一般表示期待收到你的答复,或者期待我的建议能给你带来帮助等,较为简单。
3. 写作语言补充
首段:表示相关参考句型:I am a student who is in charge of …. 表示目的:I am writing this letter to you to make some suggestions for…
中段:提建议要礼貌委婉,不能简单直接说you should, you can, you need to…这样不太礼貌而且句型也不高级。参考以下句型:
It would be greatly appreciated if you could…, because….
It is advisable that you…, which contributes to doing/N….
It would be more beneficial if you could,.. since…
尾段:表示盼复句型:I am looking forward to your reply.
4. 格式+范文示例(题目如上)
首段:表示相关+目的
我听说你大学毕业想找工作,我给你写信是就此提建议的。
中段:建议+理由
1.准备一份中文简历,可以给雇主留下好印象。
2.在求职网站登记注册,这样可以获取更多信息和资源。
尾段:盼复。
Dear Friend,
I have heard that you have graduated from college and intend to find a job in China. I am writing this email to make some suggestions on this.
My suggestions are as follows. To begin with, it is advisable for you to prepare a Chinese resume, which contributes to leaving a good impression on employers. In addition, it would be more beneficial if you could register on some job-seeking websites, so that you can have access to more information and resources.
I hope that you can find an ideal job as early as possible. I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming